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Canyon Springs - 01

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John Prengaman on 9th May 2018, 5:41 PM

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It took a lot more time than expected to tweak the look and feel of the first page for this chapter. My hope is that production times should speed up now. Of course, I've said that before.

As is plain to see, there is more text and there are fewer pictures on this page than in the past. I'm sure there will be some further exploration into the formatting as we continue, but the hope is to be able to tell a bigger and better story in a shorter amount of time. Hopefully, it works out okay!

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YOUR COMMENTS

Fafhred on 10th May 2018, 2:09 AM

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Welcome back :-)

I have a question: do you plan to move away permanently from the traditional comic format to this layout (personally I am not too keen on it, but that's me) ?

John Prengaman on 29th May 2018, 9:43 PM

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Thanks! For right now, this is the plan for the page layouts. We'll be tweaking things as we go along, so the format will likely ebb and flow over the coming months. Once the action ramps up, though, the text will most likely ramp down.

Anonymous on 10th May 2018, 3:38 AM

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So, how regularly are the pages gonna come up on the site as I've (metaphorically) been waiting forever for this one to come up.

Also, can you put up your sketches and Fox Tails on the website and will we see more nude Isla Grace in her fox form like in the earlier chapters?

John Prengaman on 29th May 2018, 9:46 PM

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We don't have a set timetable on things yet. It all depends on my available free time. Hopefully, the pace will pick up as we go along!

As for sketches and Fox Tails, I will probably be putting those up here in the not too terribly distant future. Right now, I want to devote my time right now to getting the comic back up and moving at a decent pace again.

Forestfairyunicorn on 10th May 2018, 1:50 PM

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This is a nice format! I enjoy seeing significant moments like waking up and pancake making in juxtaposition with the text.

John Prengaman on 29th May 2018, 9:47 PM

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Thanks! There will be an adjustment period, but I'm hopeful to find a good mix of text and images without the comics taking forever to produce.

Celtcath on 14th May 2018, 2:38 PM

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Liken it.

John Prengaman on 29th May 2018, 9:48 PM

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Thank you!!

Question and comment!

DFC1 on 18th May 2018, 5:45 PM

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So question when do you plan on having the rest of the chapter done I red all the chapters in like 10 min and fell in love with the series and hope you make a tone more! Please please please continue the original comic look that you have done plus if you put in a tad bit more detail in the transformation (not sure if that’s what you want call ) but over all fantastic article and bring up the children finding out there Mom is superhero that can make a twist in the comic

John Prengaman on 29th May 2018, 9:51 PM

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Thank you!! There will definitely be more transformation scenes coming up! And, the current format will be tweaked as we move along. Certainly, once the action ramps back up, the images will take more center stage again.

Why the novel?

Element on 7th Aug 2018, 9:12 PM

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I'm not a big fan of the fact it's a novel now... I prefer the comic