Page twenty-one of our story. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 1920x2880).
Sometimes making things less visible is more fun. The closest thing I've seen to this style of change are anime-style 'swish into uniform' type routines, and those can be fun too... The swirlies here add a lot of energy to the change.
Making things less visible isn't necessarily the intention. I'm sure we'll see more in later transformations. There's definitely a lot of energy flowing through that tent right now though. Maybe it won't be quite so intense for her moving forward. :)
I can't wait till next Friday :) I wish it showed the whole transformation though... But still is a great comic page... Great work... I wonder when the antagonist will be coming... But yeah good work, two thumbs up
We may not have a true antagonist for a little while. Right now, the antagonist (or protagonist if you prefer) is the transformation itself. In reality, it's just what will drive the story forward for now. Bad guys will come a bit later. :)
swirly light not too distracting if you ask me, bad guys? I'm fine with just watching her transform lol. Also can't wait till she goes "All" the way, figuring not on her first change. The teaser TF you released a while back of that happening was one of my all time favorite sequences.
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John Prengaman on 17th Dec 2015, 11:00 PM
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ThisAdamGuy on 18th Dec 2015, 6:46 AM
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I think they're wonderful.
David F on 18th Dec 2015, 7:00 AM
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John Prengaman on 19th Dec 2015, 11:27 AM
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John Prengaman on 22nd Dec 2015, 1:22 PM
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looks great on 22nd Dec 2015, 2:13 PM
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John Prengaman on 22nd Dec 2015, 4:35 PM
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