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John Prengaman on 18th Dec 2015, 12:00 AM

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Page twenty-one of our story. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 1920x2880).



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ThisAdamGuy on 18th Dec 2015, 7:46 AM

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Loving this comic so far, but I think I'd like it better without the swirly magic lights so we could see the changes better.

Brian on 18th Dec 2015, 8:40 AM

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Slipping into pron may not be the aim of this webcomic.

John Prengaman on 18th Dec 2015, 5:17 PM

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The "magic lights" will likely only be here for her first transformation. Perhaps you could consider them more metaphorical than literal. :)

ranger_brianna_new on 8th Jan 2016, 12:23 AM

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I vehemently disagree about the lights.

I think they're wonderful.

David F on 18th Dec 2015, 8:00 AM

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Sometimes making things less visible is more fun. The closest thing I've seen to this style of change are anime-style 'swish into uniform' type routines, and those can be fun too... The swirlies here add a lot of energy to the change.

John Prengaman on 18th Dec 2015, 5:19 PM

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Making things less visible isn't necessarily the intention. I'm sure we'll see more in later transformations. There's definitely a lot of energy flowing through that tent right now though. Maybe it won't be quite so intense for her moving forward. :)

A happy reader on 18th Dec 2015, 10:46 AM

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I can't wait till next Friday :) I wish it showed the whole transformation though... But still is a great comic page... Great work... I wonder when the antagonist will be coming... But yeah good work, two thumbs up

A happy reader on 18th Dec 2015, 11:18 AM

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You should release a special Christmas comic, that would be cool

John Prengaman on 18th Dec 2015, 5:25 PM

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We may not have a true antagonist for a little while. Right now, the antagonist (or protagonist if you prefer) is the transformation itself. In reality, it's just what will drive the story forward for now. Bad guys will come a bit later. :)

A happy reader on 18th Dec 2015, 10:29 PM

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Ok :) thanks for takening your time out of your day to answer my questions

A happy reader on 18th Dec 2015, 10:30 PM

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John Prengaman on 19th Dec 2015, 12:27 PM

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Of course! Thanks for taking the time out of your day to become a fan on my comic! :)

A happy reader on 19th Dec 2015, 12:36 PM

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Can you send a link to your other comics you have done before? I might be interested in reading them

John Prengaman on 19th Dec 2015, 3:43 PM

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I think if you click on my name that it will give you links to my other comics. :)

A happy reader on 20th Dec 2015, 3:47 PM

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Oh ok it did... Imma read them later :)

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Raven Cross on 21st Dec 2015, 4:01 AM

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Liking this comic so far. Can't wait for her full transformation.

John Prengaman on 22nd Dec 2015, 2:22 PM

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Thanks! You won't have to wait much longer. Merry Christmas! ;)

looks great on 22nd Dec 2015, 3:13 PM

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swirly light not too distracting if you ask me, bad guys? I'm fine with just watching her transform lol. Also can't wait till she goes "All" the way, figuring not on her first change. The teaser TF you released a while back of that happening was one of my all time favorite sequences.

John Prengaman on 22nd Dec 2015, 5:35 PM

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Thanks! Not sure yet when she'll go "all the way" yet. Probably not for another couple of chapters though. :)