Parker gets the surprise of his life - or the surprise of his wife (to be).
Page twenty-three of chapter two. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 1920x2880).
I really like thus comic. It is quite entertaining and fun. But the way they speak... full names, titles etc. It sounds weird if they are suppised to be close, and it's repetition (like in this page "Isla Grace coast is clear" and "oh my god Isla Grace?!" It... feels off, not sure is this is specific style you do on purpose or what, but it breaks the conversations and makes me feel like they are actually total strangers.
Actually her last name is Fox. This reminds me of someone I whose first name was two words (and if you just used the first one she would remind you that that wasn't her name). I suspect like my old colleague, her name is one of those that can't be shortened.
Early on in chapter one, it's mentioned that her name is Isla Grace. It means "beautiful island". Without both names, it would no longer be accurate (according to her mom). Basically, it's like Mary Jane or Peppermint Patty. By the way, just in case you aren't aware, it's pronounced "Eye-la Grace" not "Ees-la Grace". We really need to get those character bios up!
another thing, i think you need to make the reply button more obvious, because i accidentally hit the "edit" button instead, perhaps make it so that "edit" should only be viewable to the person who typed the comment=/reply (good thing it asked to log in before i could do any damage, then i realized my mistake)
Unfortunately, I don't have much control over some of the automated features of the website. I'll search through the code to see if I can adjust those items, but I'm not sure if I will be able to.
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John Prengaman on 24th Jun 2016, 12:00 AM
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Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 12:29 AM
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Raven Cross on 24th Jun 2016, 1:17 AM
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Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 4:53 PM
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why?
37forest on 24th Jun 2016, 7:33 PM
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Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 10:15 PM
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John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:01 AM
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Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 12:33 AM
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John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM
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hans_niemand on 24th Jun 2016, 1:07 AM
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So... well done again!
John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM
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HiFranc on 24th Jun 2016, 1:36 PM
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John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM
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Himself on 25th Jun 2016, 5:47 PM
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John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:55 PM
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John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:01 AM
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markoatonc on 25th Jun 2016, 3:06 AM
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HiFranc on 25th Jun 2016, 6:22 AM
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John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:06 AM
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SC on 27th Jun 2016, 12:55 AM
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another thing, i think you need to make the reply button more obvious, because i accidentally hit the "edit" button instead, perhaps make it so that "edit" should only be viewable to the person who typed the comment=/reply (good thing it asked to log in before i could do any damage, then i realized my mistake)
John Prengaman on 27th Jun 2016, 12:00 PM
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