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Parker - 23

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John Prengaman on 24th Jun 2016, 12:00 AM

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Parker gets the surprise of his life - or the surprise of his wife (to be).

Page twenty-three of chapter two. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 1920x2880).



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Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 12:29 AM

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Hm, so thats what the fox said XD all jokes aside I hope her foxy form doesn't affect her speech.

Raven Cross on 24th Jun 2016, 1:17 AM

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Seems being a fox does affect her speech

Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 4:53 PM

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Well than...talk about a speech impediment.

why?

37forest on 24th Jun 2016, 7:33 PM

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SO cute, I hope she can only yip and whine lol. Besides they can talk telepathically.

Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 10:15 PM

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I'm not saying its a bad thing.

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:01 AM

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Yes, she does lose her ability to speak in her full fox form. Hopefully, there's a way to work around it!

Brandon on 24th Jun 2016, 12:33 AM

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Also the wall art in the back do make a wonderful background in panals 10 and 11.

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM

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Thanks!

hans_niemand on 24th Jun 2016, 1:07 AM

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The "blend in" of the background art was smooth enough to get by me on the first read. And I've noticed the process favorably before.

So... well done again!

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM

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Thanks!

HiFranc on 24th Jun 2016, 1:36 PM

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Is she now fox weight or still human weight?

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM

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She's fox weight now. Certainly helps with her current predicament! As for the science behind her sudden weight loss, we'll get to that eventually.

Himself on 25th Jun 2016, 5:47 PM

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I thought we were just talking magic here i.e. conservation of mass need not apply.

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:55 PM

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Magic with some science behind it. Whether or not that science is even remotely based in the real world is another question entirely.

txinaz on 25th Jun 2016, 1:31 AM

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love his look in the 3ed and 4th panel

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:01 AM

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Thanks!

markoatonc on 25th Jun 2016, 3:06 AM

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I really like thus comic. It is quite entertaining and fun. But the way they speak... full names, titles etc. It sounds weird if they are suppised to be close, and it's repetition (like in this page "Isla Grace coast is clear" and "oh my god Isla Grace?!" It... feels off, not sure is this is specific style you do on purpose or what, but it breaks the conversations and makes me feel like they are actually total strangers.

HiFranc on 25th Jun 2016, 6:22 AM

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Actually her last name is Fox. This reminds me of someone I whose first name was two words (and if you just used the first one she would remind you that that wasn't her name). I suspect like my old colleague, her name is one of those that can't be shortened.

John Prengaman on 25th Jun 2016, 8:06 AM

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Early on in chapter one, it's mentioned that her name is Isla Grace. It means "beautiful island". Without both names, it would no longer be accurate (according to her mom). Basically, it's like Mary Jane or Peppermint Patty. By the way, just in case you aren't aware, it's pronounced "Eye-la Grace" not "Ees-la Grace". We really need to get those character bios up!

SC on 27th Jun 2016, 12:55 AM

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i always pronounced it as eyes-la.


another thing, i think you need to make the reply button more obvious, because i accidentally hit the "edit" button instead, perhaps make it so that "edit" should only be viewable to the person who typed the comment=/reply (good thing it asked to log in before i could do any damage, then i realized my mistake)

John Prengaman on 27th Jun 2016, 12:00 PM

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Unfortunately, I don't have much control over some of the automated features of the website. I'll search through the code to see if I can adjust those items, but I'm not sure if I will be able to.