The Incredible Golden Fox - 14


John Prengaman on 14th Oct 2016, 12:00 AM

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HiFranc on 14th Oct 2016, 12:24 AM

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I'm guessing that got a DNA sample from a hair and / or found the description of her companion familiar.

ranger_brianna_new on 17th Oct 2016, 4:39 AM

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Well, it's really not hard.
The general's known her for her entire life. Just the THOUGHT of a "Female fox superhero" would be enough to make him suspicious.

Then you throw in all the extras. Her appearance is a good disguise, but it's not a perfect one. All the times she's transformed in risky situations are situations where she could have been exposed. It's possible some of the times she thought it was safe to fox out, someone spotted her. It's not too hard to figure out from certain habits that she isn't exactly normal. While the hospital might not find it so strange she's had seven-month pregnancies, the general would have plenty of reason to be suspicious.

That, all before the simple fact that she apparently blabbers a lot during her fight, and it only takes so many crossreferences with interrogated captives to narrow things down. (And this is not a complete list! I'm sure I've left off plenty of reasons that could have tipped him off.)

To put it bluntly, anyone with knowledge of her should be able to figure it out, and the general has so many extra resources that quite literally the only reason he'd have to doubt it is the thought of it being TOO obvious.

CCCP on 14th Oct 2016, 12:28 AM

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Well at least practice will be much easier now

K'iche on 14th Oct 2016, 12:35 AM

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The general is going to be surprised or be meh its OK

Himself on 14th Oct 2016, 6:04 AM

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Gotta open the big door.
I have some suspicion that she is not the first in her family with such abilities. Her maiden name may not be coincidence.

CCCP on 14th Oct 2016, 12:10 PM

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Maybe you still have the mother and her son and daughters

Torchfire on 19th Oct 2016, 1:12 AM

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I take it she just got recruited into some kind of a paranormal policing agency and will now have to fight others like herself instead of petty thugs?