I haven't ever done too much in the way of pure action scenes in any of my previous work. So, we're exploring new territory here, and there are bound to be some bumps in the road. I hope you guys are patient, and you enjoy watching the (hopeful) improvement of the work as we start to encounter more and more action scenes.
Page sixteen of chapter four. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 2100x3150).
Is it a safe but erroneous assumption that the government made the staff? That would be a nice thing for the government to supply as protection for their investment in the Incredible Golden Fox.
... at one swell foop, at 2AM, which says something about how well it's going​. I'm already following a few too many feeds, but I may have take time for this. By the way, she may not be happy if someone points out that "zorra", like "vixen" but more so, has a rather rude slang meaning.
MY COMMENTS
John Prengaman on 28th Apr 2017, 12:00 AM
[edit] [delete]
Page sixteen of chapter four. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 2100x3150).
post a comment
YOUR COMMENTS
Eragon on 28th Apr 2017, 1:29 AM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
For the first full combat page its pretty good, I specially like the crazed look on Isla's face as she blasts them with her staff
Torchfire on 28th Apr 2017, 3:29 AM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
It makes me wonder what other Sci-Fi tech she has in addition to her staff and mask...
Dragonous on 28th Apr 2017, 7:21 AM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
mithril on 28th Apr 2017, 9:21 AM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
txinaz on 28th Apr 2017, 8:28 AM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
Mark Lungo on 28th Apr 2017, 6:03 PM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
RocketT.Coyote on 28th Apr 2017, 7:13 PM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
Just read thru what you've posted so far...
Loxmyth on 28th Apr 2017, 11:30 PM
[edit] [delete] [reply]
Raven Cross on 6th May 2017, 8:00 AM
[edit] [delete] [reply]