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Operation Desert Fox - 16

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John Prengaman on 28th Apr 2017, 12:00 AM

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I haven't ever done too much in the way of pure action scenes in any of my previous work. So, we're exploring new territory here, and there are bound to be some bumps in the road. I hope you guys are patient, and you enjoy watching the (hopeful) improvement of the work as we start to encounter more and more action scenes.

Page sixteen of chapter four. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 2100x3150).



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Eragon on 28th Apr 2017, 1:29 AM

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I honestly didn't expect that from Parker!

For the first full combat page its pretty good, I specially like the crazed look on Isla's face as she blasts them with her staff

Torchfire on 28th Apr 2017, 3:29 AM

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Let me guess: Parker built her weapon after watching Stargate:SG1.

It makes me wonder what other Sci-Fi tech she has in addition to her staff and mask...

Dragonous on 28th Apr 2017, 7:21 AM

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Don't forget her suit also

mithril on 28th Apr 2017, 9:21 AM

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Is it a safe but erroneous assumption that the government made the staff? That would be a nice thing for the government to supply as protection for their investment in the Incredible Golden Fox.

txinaz on 28th Apr 2017, 8:28 AM

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that's the weapon that parker could not bring to her moms house. they did need the English lesson

Mark Lungo on 28th Apr 2017, 6:03 PM

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Are there going to be any heroic Mexican characters in the story?

RocketT.Coyote on 28th Apr 2017, 7:13 PM

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Vixen works fine. Except perhaps at Christmastime.

Just read thru what you've posted so far...

Loxmyth on 28th Apr 2017, 11:30 PM

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... at one swell foop, at 2AM, which says something about how well it's going​. I'm already following a few too many feeds, but I may have take time for this. By the way, she may not be happy if someone points out that "zorra", like "vixen" but more so, has a rather rude slang meaning.

Raven Cross on 6th May 2017, 8:00 AM

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Where's Fridays page?!